So the griffball map.. I had it completed, then some idiots came by and deleted everything... so i reverted it back to original, and built a few things. On the plus side, I did make one major change to our idea, pretty much just changing the location of the "sky box" to allow fora better quality "window"
So, I think I improved the infomercial. If everyone's ready, then I will post it up.
In the meantime, here is episode three. I planned it so that it's going to be the frigate or shuttle, depending on who wins and loses.
I am using a professional script writing program, the problem isn't how unprofessional is, the problem is that video games haven't been adapted into a professional format. That is why I am using slang, to make it as understandable as possible. There is no other way to do it that is clearly defined. Sadly, after transferred to text edit for others to read it which makes it seem less professional. I started using the program before I went to my script writing class and I learned that the teacher uses it for script writing also.I think we should make the scripts a bit more professional. Instead of adding a bunch of modern slang in there would you mind if I went through and edited the scripts? I have insight into writing so I believe I can help edit them and make them seem more adult like and military professional.