Map Preview Dockyard (Will Change Name)

[Wakko45]

Here is my map Dockyard! It is my second map I've made on Halo 4 but the first one I am publishing. So far it is only set up for CTF but I will be adding Extraction, Slayer, KoTH, etc.
I played it tonight in my Customs Lobby and it seemed to go well.

The containers get stuck sometimes and sometimes they respawn too soon so I'll have to fix that. If anyone that played in it tonight please give me feed back!

The map is a large symmetrical map meant for 5v5, 6v6, 7v7, or 8v8. It features a semi-working moving container function that is meant to simulate a research team shipping out technology from a forerunner structure into a ship. Here are the pictures!

OVERVIEW:

FROM BASE TO CENTER:

ROCKET SPAWN:

BOTTOM TUNNEL+ENTRANCE TO SWORD ROOM:

CENTER STRUCTURE COMES TO A POINT:

SHIP OVERVIEW:

SIDE OVERVIEW:

More Pictures In Spoiler:

Spoiler

SIDE OF CENTER STRUCTURE:

BASE OVERVIEW:

SWORD ROOM:

SIDE OVERVIEW #2 & MOVING CONTAINERS:

SHIP OVERVIEW AND SNIPER SPAWN:

BACK OF SHIP:

^^Pictures in Spoiler^^

 

[Josh]

The map looks pretty good and you have used items for things they aren't normally used for... I like it!

 

[Josh]

But you may want to add some attention to detail, try to work all the pieces to make it look like the fit together and not so out of place. For example: in the picture on the bottom entitled 'Side Overview', the ramp on below the gravity lift looks out of place and doesn't fit. Not sure its the angle I'm looking at it from or not. But good map overall.

 

[Wakko45]

But you may want to add some attention to detail, try to work all the pieces to make it look like the fit together and not so out of place. For example: in the picture on the bottom entitled 'Side Overview', the ramp on below the gravity lift looks out of place and doesn't fit. Not sure its the angle I'm looking at it from or not. But good map overall.

The ramp below the mancannon on the left or the gravlift on the right of the picture?

 

[Josh]

The ramp below the mancannon on the left or the gravlift on the right of the picture?

On the left. Sorry for not being clear, I didn't see the other one.

 

[Wakko45]

I think I know which one you are talking about and yeah I agree it's not exactly the best fit. The only problem was that the ramp to the doorway that it connects to was raised off the ground and I needed it to connect to the ground somehow. With nearly no objects or money left a ramp was the only thing that created a smooth transition with no bumps.

 

[Josh]

Ahh ok.